i like the 3d attempt... but it kinda makes my head hurt. the typography, elements, and principles are good, and the big letters keep my attention focused on the text.
Good quote.The 3d look is really cool and creative. The leading needs to either be smaller at some areas or larger in the others. Friend should also stand out better because it is the main thing
Very nice font and color. The balance and down triangle shape of it created a good feeling. The emphasis was great, but I think "be" should be emphasized instead of "one". That's what I think, overall it was good!
Diggin' the quote and the 3D effect. i think it looks pretty cool, personally. The alignments a little off towards the bottom, its not completely centered.. Overall i liked it and don't think you should change a lot. I think it all ties in pretty well.
i like it. its balanced and alignment is good. it grabs me attetion.
ReplyDeleteNice quote, it really grabs my attention and it has nice use of color and emphasis.
ReplyDeleteI like this quote, and the red/blue words add great emphasis. the only thing I would change is maybe making Emerson's name smaller.
ReplyDeletei like the 3d attempt... but it kinda makes my head hurt. the typography, elements, and principles are good, and the big letters keep my attention focused on the text.
ReplyDeleteGood quote.The 3d look is really cool and creative. The leading needs to either be smaller at some areas or larger in the others. Friend should also stand out better because it is the main thing
ReplyDeleteVery nice font and color. The balance and down triangle shape of it created a good feeling. The emphasis was great, but I think "be" should be emphasized instead of "one". That's what I think, overall it was good!
ReplyDeleteDiggin' the quote and the 3D effect. i think it looks pretty cool, personally. The alignments a little off towards the bottom, its not completely centered.. Overall i liked it and don't think you should change a lot. I think it all ties in pretty well.
ReplyDeleteI agree the alignment is a little off. But I like the 3D effect and I love the quote choice. Great Job overall.
ReplyDeleteLike the quote, the 3d effect really grabs my attention, and overall well balanced
ReplyDeleteThe alignment is a little off but i like the 3D effect. Really good quote. It all ties together very nicely.
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